User talk:Oliviacastagno/sandbox

Peer Review: Hi Olivia, I think this is a very interesting topic! I think you did a great job of expanding the article to include examples of different types of psychogenic symptoms. I thought it was smart to categorize the different types of psychogenic movements and offer a clear description of each one. (I think I will be doing something similar in my article now!) When you publish it to the website, I would make “Psychogenic movements” a heading and each type a subheading so that it is easy to follow.

I think the most important improvement you could make, would be it would be to expand the section on causes of psychogenic disorders. A fascinating set of symptoms, I would be very curious to learn more about the possible mechanisms and if they have any research on how prevalent the diagnosis is. Other ways you could strengthen the article would be to include more sources and add some pictures to enhance your explanations.

Your writing was very informative and easy to follow. Despite the complicated topic, I could understand the majority of your writing and I think people without a science background will be able to do the same! Under the final section, I wasn’t sure what motor programming was- maybe you can add a few sentences or link it to a Wikipedia article about the topic? Overall, I think you are off to a great start and I am curious to learn even more about the topic. Melissa Cary9 (talk) 21:21, 27 October 2018 (UTC)