User talk:Oliviadias8987/sandbox

Hey, I thought your topic of choice was interesting because I see these salons everywhere but have never been to it before. Since it is a very common and popular company, having information about franchising would be beneficial to this article to get their company name out and to expand the company even more. I also included an article about becoming a stylist; what one should know if they are interesting in owning a salon or working for this company. http://www.firstchoice.com/Franchising/default.asp http://www.becomeahairdresser.net/ --Claudine.Sabat (talk) 19:39, 4 November 2014 (UTC)

Hey, your article was informative and interesting to read. I wasn't aware of the many campaigns First Choice Haircutters was involved with. Perhaps you could expand this article by including how to open a First Choice franchise and include franchise details. These links may help: http://www.startupbizhub.com/open-a-first-choice-haircutters-franchise.htm http://www.entrepreneur.com/franchises/firstchoicehaircutters/282347-0.html --Skes7272 (talk) 23:21, 20 October 2014 (UTC)

Hello, Maybe including reviews on first choice haircutters may help people choose if they will go to that location. Both positive and negative reviews. Its always good to take a glance at both sides. Especially if you want to go to one specific location, they help identify which hairdresser may be more experienced. 1. Toronto- http://www.yelp.ca/biz/first-choice-haircutters-toronto-2 2. Oshawa- http://www.yelp.ca/biz/first-choice-haircutters-oshawa-2

--GemmaPaquet (talk) 16:52, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

Hey, I didn't realize so much could be said about First Choice Haircutters! I was thinking you could include a bit about how people can apply to work at a First Choice, here's a link to their career page: http://www.firstchoice.com/Careers/default.asp Also, maybe you should include prices, you mention that they're a low cost franchise, but how much is low? Here's an example of one location's prices http://www.firstchoice.com/customer/salondetail/default.asp?salonid=51136 You may want to see if they are the same or similar across the board as well. --M4Munro (talk) 17:25, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

I didn't know how big the company First Choice Haircutters was. Some points you can add in could involve showing off some student specials and what locations are close to them. https://www.spccard.ca/partners/first-choice-haircutters. Directions to closest First Choice Haircutters. http://www.firstchoice.com/Customer/SalonLocator/. --Ridgebacks19 (talk) 00:16, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

Really well done article, I didn't know a lot about the facts that you presented, very interesting! Here are some extra links you might find of interest: http://www.entrepreneur.com/franchises/firstchoicehaircutters/282347-0.html and another here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Regis_Corporation --Trippleare (talk) 15:38, 20 October 2014 (UTC)