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Digital Footprint Peer Review: Elaborate more on what a digital footprint and how/why it is so important to a doctor. You made good,credible points now back them up from your sources.

Olivia's Peer Review
Overall this draft is presented with information that is relevant and to the point of the significance of digital footprints. Maybe you could go back through the articles to find information that flows together. Good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ktbannis (talk • contribs) 12:41, 1 November 2018 (UTC) - The article is clear, well written and with reachable references, but you might want to use an example other than a doctor's digital footprint to further define digital footprints. This is because I almost thought that your draft was about doctors and not about digital footprints as a whole. So, I think you should make a clear heading that shows that you are writing about digital footprints.

Peer Review - rosmery
I agree with everyone else that your draft is very well formatted and structured. I understood and got the main idea of it being about a digital footprint. However, if you could add different examples of your topic it would strengthen your article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rosmeryl (talk • contribs) 20:17, 1 November 2018 (UTC)