User talk:Olori94/sandbox

From Dr. Cohen: Age segregation might be the easier of the two. The problem with adding race to the discussion of Unequal Childhoods is that it is based on research that says that race is not as relevant as social class when it comes to differences in the ways children are raised. I have this book if you are interested. I use to use it this class in the past. If you choose Unequal Childhoods I would be happy to share the book with you but again, she really does not agree with the racial divide as much as the socioeconomic divide.

Brittany's Peer Review
Overall, I believe the structure you have for your article is pretty good. You focused on the main key topics and also tied it down to some of the main key factors we have discussed in class. I do believe that you probably need to add another source. For the most part, very good work. It seems to be well organized and informational. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brittany Floyd (talk • contribs) 16:45, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you. I shall work on adding more sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Olori94 (talk • contribs) 01:46, 16 March 2018 (UTC)