User talk:Oludara Orederu/Cartesian Circle

I have peer reviewed your edits to the article you are editing! User:Oludara_Orederu/Cartesian_Circle/JEby1_Peer_Review

Peer review comments list:

Some of the information in the lead should go into its own section The lead should be a shorter summary The lead should be concise The information should be further expanded upon Organize the content more efficiently

In response to what my peer has told me I will break the lead into another section. My peer has expressed the need for me to make the lead more concise so I will due so by making the lead a shorter introductory section to clearly describe the main topics of this article. I have also been told to further expand the content of the article so I will include more information in order to make sure that I expand on the topics and go further in depth. I will also include new sections as I find necessary as my peer has told me to organize the content of the article more efficiently. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oludara Orederu (talk • contribs) 04:48, 4 March 2020 (UTC)