User talk:Omalleei/sandbox

Hi Eileen! I think this is a great outline of Freud and Psychoanalytic Theory! You and Jenna clearly did a lot of research and put a lot of effort into this! I would say that the three areas that need improvement are: 1) In the beginning when you talk about Freud and the Anna O. experiment, maybe discuss it in more detail because it seems like it was a big starting point for Freud and it was a little confusing to read about it and not know much about it. 2) I was a little confused about the definitions - were you planning on using both of those definitions or just one? I think you could combine the two rather than have them be separate. 3) Maybe you could discuss each of the stages in Psychosexual Development a little more in depth. Those were a big part of Freud's theory and they aren't really touched upon too much. The strengths of this draft are: 1) I love that you discuss the strengths and limitations about the theory. It is important not to show just one side of theories like this, so, I think it is great that you two included the limitations. 2) You have a lot of information about the Id, the Ego, and the Superego which is great because it is such a big part of Freud's work and you explain them really well! 3) You explain dreams and latent and manifest content really well! Overall, great article so far! Pagemd (talk) 17:34, 19 November 2012 (UTC)