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"Article Evaluation" Name of article: Argument Technology, Argument technologyhttp://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0184311

-Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate.

-- I believe it`s topic really important topic this is why I chose this article Lead Guiding questions

-Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

--Yes, introductory sentence clearly describes what is argument technology -Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?

--Yes it does. ``Argument technology has applications in a variety of domains, including education, healthcare, policy making, and risk management and has a variety of sub-fields, methodologies and technologies.`` -Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?

--The article is more about future. Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

--it is concise. Lead evaluation Content Guiding questions

-Is the article's content relevant to the topic?

-- yes it is -Is the content up-to-date?

-- it is up to number -Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

-- No there is not. -Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

--The article does not deal with any of Wikipedia`s gaps. The topics are related to historically. Content evaluation Tone and Balance Guiding questions

-Is the article neutral?

-- no it is not. --Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?

-- Yes there is two different claims. Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

--overpresented Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

--in favor of one position Tone and balance evaluation Sources and References Guiding questions

Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?

-- all facts in the article backed up by reliable secondary source. Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?

yes it is Are the sources current?

yes it is Check a few links. Do they work?

yes they are working. Sources and references evaluation Organization Guiding questions

Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?

the article clear and easy to read Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?

none Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

well-organized Organization evaluation Images and Media Guiding questions

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?

no it does not have images Are images well-captioned?

--- Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?

--- Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

--- Images and media evaluation Checking the talk page Guiding questions

What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?

--The conversations are helping to understand the article better. How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?

C class and it is part of WikiProjects. Talk page evaluation Overall impressions Guiding questions

What is the article's overall status?

medium developed What are the article's strengths?

good organization and detailed information. How can the article be improved?

with some relevant images. How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?

Article has good organization with specific important information.it is medium developed.

“Peer review Assignment 7 completed” “Samantha peer-reviewed John’s article”.
“Justin peer-reviewed Computer and Video game’s article”. I am reviewing Cooper Justin's work on an article Computer and Video Games. The article is about how computer and video games are computer, how it can be better, what is important for gamers, what is the future of computer and video games. I believe generally the technology will be everywhere in our life. And Computer and video games will be very important part of technology and modern life. According to my Mygaming website ``There are 1.8 billion gamers in the world, and PC gaming dominates the market``. The number of gamers is really a lot and it proves why computer and video games area is so important. Every 1 of 5 people is a gamer. On the other hand we need to think about why computer and video games are popular and what gamers like. I believe the reason why computer and video games are popular, gamers are able to do the things on computer and video games which they can not do in real life. Second thing I agree with Justin what gamers like, reality is the biggest important thing for gamers. For a game, how it is seem more real, it will be more popular. Computer and video games area is really huge and it`s future is so bright. By every new day gamer`s number is increasing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Omer rahsan (talk • contribs) 03:57, 19 October 2020 (UTC)

ASSIGHTMENT 5
After reviewing the online shopping Wikipedia article I have spotted some areas that I think deserve some expanding or revising. Firstly the reason why I chose this article, I believe it is really important topic/area in this world especially with developing of technology. The article is well written and really good organized. The writer tried to touch almost every important points with related to topic. But I want to add some important points which needs to be in this article. The first thing is shipping problems. Not only in the online business, in every field of business, the most important thing happiness of customer. How you can make them happy with their item and get them comfort, obviously you will get more business. At this point shipping problems are being more important. When some of people got their product, later they found out it got damaged or other problems based on shipping problems. Of course most of companies are giving a return policy to their customer but the customers are having really hard time in the process, if especially their product is big like washing machine, fridge etc.. In this situation, the most important and best thing for everyone which the companies are need to do, try to take really attention about the shipping. If they can minimize the shipping problems, online business will get better by every new day. Especially in United States businesses are based on trust between sellers and customers. But some of customers are taking advantage of online shopping. As a mentioned above one of the most important thing for online business is return policy. Therefore the reason why return policy exists, if you got your item already damaged, not working or any other good reason. Obviously not for you need a suit for a wedding, use it, then return it back for any reason and save your money. This is the process of how some people are taking advantage of return policy. At this point, companies should try to develop some systems to stop these misappropriations above. I believe this should be under of the title, fraud, in the article.