User talk:On The Dog Watch/sandbox

I like your focus on making the language neutral and clearer. For example, changing the verbiage to "may be accessed by" versus "colleagues or clients to see". Great progress on this assignment - only suggestion is maybe one more edit to neutral or clearer language (and the edit can be one word like in the Coca Cola edit).DrTraceyJHayes (talk) 18:59, 27 February 2021 (UTC)