User talk:Onyru

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Syed Abdullah Shah (July 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

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 * yeah i see, but this is a Pakistan National Team player, he will also feature in the upcoming U23 Qualifiers. I can find and add more sources, if required. Onyru (talk) 22:46, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi. In the past just playing at national level was deemed notable (hence a lot of existing poor articles) but that was changed a few years back and not WP:GNG is applied (also see Notability (sports)). So basically now all such bios require significant coverage in multiple independent reliable sources to show notability. Cheers KylieTastic (talk) 08:33, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Well, he is currently *the only* pakistan born international who made it to clubs outside Pakistan (Maledives). His Name unfortunately is very common, so searching for him yield a lot of articles - but few in football. I want to resort to the rest of the team, who are by no means more covered or relevant. In fact Abdullah Shah is one of the most important players or the team. As i told: i can get more sources, if required. But in general: offcourse this is a highly relevant profile. He will be a Teamplayer for the next 10 years. In Pakistan literaly *millions* know his name........... Onyru (talk) 09:10, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
 * check out for example:
 * https://www.transfermarkt.com/abdullah-shah/profil/spieler/1076776
 * or
 * https://globalsportsarchive.com/people/soccer/abdullah-shah/495635/
 * or
 * https://www.footballpakistan.com/2023/07/abdullah-shah-optimistic-about-pakistans-chances-in-fifa-world-cup-2026-qualifier-against-cambodia-geo-super/ Onyru (talk) 09:17, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi, I just had a look at your draft and made some fixes. Try resubmitting again, should be fine now. Also ideally the title should Abdullah Shah (footballer, born 2001) per WP:COMMONNAME. Cheers and good editing 82.6.13.166 (talk) 10:53, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
 * I have moved to Draft:Abdullah Shah (footballer) and 82.6.13.166 has re-submitted. KylieTastic (talk) 13:11, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
 * thank you! Onyru (talk) 15:04, 31 July 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Torben Witajewski has been accepted
 Torben Witajewski, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:48, 3 November 2023 (UTC)