User talk:Oogunnaike/Gender inequality in Nigeria

My additions are in bold.

Peer review by Olivia O'Neil
Hi! I see that this was a very under-developed page prior to your edits. You contributed so much useful, relevant information! Congratulations!

I think this is great work. You have: •A large number of citations •Those citations are to appropriate sources with objective information •You maintain a neutral point of view throughout your edits •Your edits add multiple new, important topics to the Wiki article •Information added is up-to-date

Recommendations I have: •Add onto the "Variation by Region" section, as the only sub-section included is for Northern Nigeria. Are there other regions relevant to the topic of gender inequality? If so, maybe add in a bit of information on those too. If not, maybe note that other regions don't experience gender inequality (with a citation). •The "Religion and Culture" sub-section under "Reasons for Inequalities" has no citations. It's also pretty short. If you can't find anything online to cite for it, delete that section as it is not objective information. However, I'm sure you found it somewhere and maybe just forgot to cite it :) •Same goes for the "Education" sub-section under "Reasons for Inequalities." There aren't any citations but, since you include multiple percentages, I'm sure that you do have a citation to include here already. •For the "Variation by Region" section, your first few sentences need a citation -- likely a link to the 1999 Nigerian constitution if you can find it.

I hope this helps! Best, Olivia — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ooneil (talk • contribs) 05:46, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you Olivia, this is really helpful. Yes, I did have sources to include under 'Education' but Wikipedia couldn't find the article I wanted to cite. I will look into either deleting 'Religion and Culture' or finding more substantial information on it since I think it is important to the article as it is a big part of Nigeria. Oogunnaike (talk) 19:55, 24 November 2020 (UTC)

Peers Review (Yanlin Chen):

The historical perspective of Nigeria on gender inequality helps understand the cultural settings that shape Nigerian's live. It will be better if adding more regions such as Eastern Nigeria. It will be better if adding more details and sources such as examples and data, to all different fields. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oogunnaike (talk • contribs) 04:27, 30 November 2020 (UTC)