User talk:Oranevenhaim

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Hello, Oranevenhaim, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Opportunities for improvement on Eugenics in the United States
Hi, I tagged one of your recent contributions as having some areas for improvement. Specifically, in Eugenics in the United States, you use vague phrasing that is not appropriate for an encyclopedia. For example, you say "Eugenics has been supported by members of the African American community for a long time." This is vague and sounds like it could be original research. You should add a year to make this more specific, e.g.: The African American community has supported some principles of eugenics since at least xxxx (citation). Furthermore, the sentence "Eugenics seemed to be accepted by all kinds of people" also sounds like original research. Check out this resource to learn what "weasel words" are and how to avoid them WP:WEASEL. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:10, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

Oran's Peer Review
Oran-- Your edits on the article "Eugenics in the United States" helped the article become more rich with information. Your sources were both credible and as neutral as they can be. This helps the article stay factual and unbiased as well. Your writing in general helped to keep the reader engaged and enhanced the article over all. Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Carolinedehn (talk • contribs) 14:37, 22 October 2018 (UTC)