User talk:OrangeMouse

Nathan Matthewson Shippee
Hi and thanks for the article. It appears, however, that large chunks of text have been copied directly into the article from other sources. For legal reasons, all text must be written in your own words; copyrighted material must be removed on sight. Even changing a few words around while still keeping the same flow and sequence of the source is too close for use to use. As you created the page, you'll know best which sections were copied from where, and can re-word them. Please do so as soon as possible, to prevent the article from being mercilessly pruned of copyrighted material, or even deleted altogether. I'll be happy to answer any questions, as this is admittedly a complex area. Thanks, Crow  Caw  22:16, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi and thanks for your review. I'm wondering which chunks you're referring to?  I didn't produce the article, myself, and if you could provide me with at least an example or two, it would be most helpful.  I believe those areas text that have been copied directly are in quotes and are footnoted, but could be mistaken. Thanks for your help! OrangeMouse (talk) 13:18, 26 May 2016 (UTC)


 * Being new to this, I realized that I neglected to preface my response with the "helpme". My apologies.  And, hope you can help me out with those sections that you find were copied from elsewhere as I and the writer of the article are unable to decipher this. Thanks in advance for your help!--OrangeMouse (talk) 03:56, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * I've removed the offending text. It was taken directly from an obituary (I provided the link in the edit history). The are not quotes or footnotes, but entire paragraphs taken from the other site. This is not acceptable. On a related note, unless a quote is particularly relevant to a passage, it doesn't need to be on the page. Primefac (talk) 05:48, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * I have an additional comment regarding a re-reading of your earlier comments. Sharing of accounts is absolutely not allowed. You say "you" didn't write this article, but the contribution history shows this account wrote the article. If you are not the person who originally used this account, then you must create a new one. See WP:NOSHARE for more information. Primefac (talk) 05:58, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Premefac, for your help and comments! I completely understand now.  I created this page at the request of and favor to a good friend of mine with text that was provided to me.  The account is my (individual) account and isn't being shared with anyone.  I believe, by definition, this wouldn't be considered a shared account? Thanks! --OrangeMouse (talk) 15:50, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Ah, I see; I thought you meant someone else had written the article using this account and then you had taken it over. What you did is not an ideal situation, but it's acceptable (it just muddles up attribution). Apologies for the assumption. Primefac (talk) 03:39, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
 * No worries and thanks so much for your help!--OrangeMouse (talk) 15:38, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi! I'm wondering if you one of Wikipedia's wonderful editors can ensure that this article is suitable for Wikipedia? The article has been edited and, hopefully, is now acceptable. Thanks in advance! ; )
 * Hello! I've taken a look at the article, and there are still a few problems with it.


 * There are still some sections that are too closely paraphrased from the obituary. You can see WP:PARAPHRASE and this Copyvio report
 * The article's style isn't completely consistent with the Manual of Style. See MOS:BIO. If you can't fix it yourself, you can tag the article with  to add it to a list of articles needing attention.
 * As far as sources and actual content go, there looks to be enough content, but there could always be more. Your biggest issues, as I see them, are the paraphrasing and the style. AntiCompositeNumber (talk) 16:48, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks AntiCompositeNumber for your input. Question: since the article has been rewritten twice, would it be possible (and passable) to attribute and cite the published obituary as a source?  Thanks again!OrangeMouse (talk) 17:32, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Help me!
Since the article has been rewritten twice, would it be possible (and passable) to attribute and cite the published obituary as a source? Thanks!

OrangeMouse (talk) 16:46, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * From what I can see; as long as there's no copyvio, it seems acceptable. SwisterTwister   talk  18:33, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nathan Matthewson Shippee (October 19)
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Chris Troutman ( talk ) 06:16, 19 October 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Nathan Matthewson Shippee has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Nathan Matthewson Shippee. Thanks! NewYorkActuary (talk) 03:42, 2 December 2016 (UTC)

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Your draft article, Draft:Nathan Matthewson Shippee


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