User talk:Oscar1123581321

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'''Cryptk(talk) 20:33, 6 January 2008 (UTC)

Show Jumping
Thanks for your edits on the article Show_jumping. The capitalization that you used is in violation of the Wikipedia Manual of Style because Every Word Starts With A Capital Letter... could you go back and fix it so that only the first word of each sentence is capitalized. This can happen if you accidentally did your edit IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS. '''Cryptk(talk) 20:30, 6 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Nevermind, I am going to rephrase it a little to make it more wikipedia-esque. I will write here again after I am done so you can look and see what I did. '''Cryptk(talk) 20:40, 6 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Ok, I finished rephrasing. I removed the sentence about jumping in mud because it does not really fit in that section, nor is there a section that it really fits into.  When making edits not to address them to the reader (you will be judged) since not everyone reading the article is trying to learn how to do whatever the article is about.  Instead just provide a description, here is what I changed your edits to.




 * See how that is not talking to/addressing the reader.


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