User talk:Osidemike

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Suyá music article
Great work. Excellent research and writing. Your section title doesn't really fit, though. Maybe "Cultural context" or "History and context" or "Performance context." Think about what your section is really describing and choose an appropriate title. Also, the two paragraphs seem disorganized. You might want to use subheadings, like "ritual music" or "types of music" to give it some more structure. These sections can be very short. Other than just general proofreading (be consistent with spelling and capitalization), it looks good. Nposs (talk) 15:06, 10 November 2009 (UTC)