User talk:Oslofirstave

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ish Entertainment (January 24)
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bonadea contributions talk 14:45, 24 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi!
 * Thank you for this feedback. I have revised the article to remove some of the non-neutral language (ie. changing "Emmy-award winning CEO" to simply "CEO"). I have also added citations for all of the bullet point items, all of which are written by a third party and not related to the subject.
 * I look forward to your further feedback if necessary, and I appreciate it! Oslofirstave (talk) 16:31, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Ish Entertainment (January 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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CNMall41 (talk) 20:11, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael Hirschorn (February 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by InterstellarGamer12321 was:

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InterstellarGamer12321 ( talk &#124;  contribs ) 12:49, 23 February 2023 (UTC)