User talk:Osmanaray

Hi Osmanaray

The article Ethnic origins of the Turks, Turkization of Anatolia and the formation of Turkish national identity reflects a considerable research. Without citing my opinions on the content, I’ll comment on the following: Have a good day.Nedim Ardoğa (talk) 13:56, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The name of the article is too lengthy. (It will be almost impossible for users to reach the article without memorizing the too long name.) You should consider to move it to a shorter title. (By the way, probably the word Turkification is a better word than Turkization)
 * 2) In Wikipedia, sourced material instead of original research is encouraged. Your opinions may face serious reactions. (The article has already been tagged by User:MuffledThud .) Can you maybe reorganise your article so that references replace your personal opinions ? Also, I suggest not to use first person singular pronoun in claims. (I follow Smith....)
 * 3) The article is not categorized and there are no links to other articles.
 * 4) The style of the article needs improvement: Too lengthy sections, lack of section heads, lack of in line citations, (probably unintentional) paragraph bloks etc. If you prefer, I may gladly help you to improve the article in style. (But of course, the inline citations need your effort.