User talk:Otb18

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Hi, just reverted your changes to Māori people.

Sorry to do this to your first attempt. Don't feel bad, it happens to all of us....

The wording was not particularly good, and although it looks like you intended to provide some references, thos [xxx] numbers didn't link anywhere. I'd suggest using your Sandbox to practice, and perhaps asking someone (via the Talk page) to review it before posting again. I'm not quite sure how you woud word it, but I think it would be important to change your version "The Māori who claim no religion, however, are very still very spiritual people." to something like "Regardless whether they profess a religion or none, Māori are very still generally very spiritual people" - because all your examples are generally followed by Christians a well. Oh, and you'll need to sort out good references, and do them properly. - Snori (talk) 01:55, 31 March 2020 (UTC)