User talk:Ottaviaiac/sandbox

Hi Ottavia, the subject of your article is clear and well exposed. Keep it up, good work.

Hello Ottavia,

Your article is very informative and clearly structure to allow the reader to easily navigate the topic. A minor suggestion would be to add links for the main words used so that a less experienced reader can easily look up information on Wikipedia. Also, being this article about a pathway, a stepwise diagram could helpful. Great work!

LorenzoPetrella (talk) 16:29, 22 December 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Lorenzo! I’ve just added links directly in the main page. I couldn’t find images that were clear enough, so I preferred avoiding confusion in the readers. --Ottaviaiac (talk) 17:09, 22 December 2019 (UTC)