User talk:Outlanderrr/Sexism and video games

The feedback I received was to firstly not omit the wikilinks/citations when rewording the lead. I have addressed this by adding the wikilinks back in and will be putting the proper citation for the information back in when it is in live Wikipedia. Next, the reviewer felt that the discussion of sexism within game storylines is not fit for this article, but rather a gender representations article in games. However, I disagree with that comment. The gender representations in games are in fact sexist, and can make male players in turn have sexist views towards women in real life. I do not feel that simply putting the information in a gender representations article is a better fit. Lastly, the reviewer felt that the contribution regarding the two organizations in the countermeasures section should be better supported by secondary sources, rather than primary sources. I agree and will be adding more secondary sources about the success the organizations have had. Outlanderrr (talk) 12:02, 25 April 2022 (UTC)