User talk:Ovedc/Archive 2

Your submission at Articles for creation: TASC Consulting & Capital (January 5)
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— Bilorv ( talk ) 13:37, 5 January 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alon Kaplan (February 12)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

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 DGG ( talk ) 20:46, 12 February 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Noam Shalev (February 19)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 05:13, 19 February 2020 (UTC)

Orphaned non-free image File:Jolt-logo-square.png
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Your submission at Articles for creation
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1292simon (talk) 10:45, 1 June 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alon Kaplan (June 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by KartikeyaS343 were:

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KartikeyaS (talk) 07:12, 21 June 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Noam Shalev concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Noam Shalev, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:21, 20 July 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yehuda Ullmann (July 20)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Lapablo was:

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Lapablo (talk) 19:47, 20 July 2020 (UTC)

further explanation
The subject is a scientist. The important factors for notability are covered in WP:PROF.  DGG ( talk ) 18:40, 24 September 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: TASC Consulting & Capital (July 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Chris troutman was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Chris Troutman ( talk ) 16:19, 21 July 2020 (UTC)

Copyright problem on Navigation function
Content you added to the above article appears to have been copied from https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007%2Fs12555-018-0563-2, which is not released under a compatible license. Copying text directly from a source is a violation of Wikipedia's copyright policy. Unfortunately, for copyright reasons, the content had to be removed. Content you add to Wikipedia should be written in your own words. Please leave a message on my talk page if you have any questions. — Diannaa (talk) 12:31, 21 August 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alon Kaplan (August 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kvng was:

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~Kvng (talk) 16:01, 31 August 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Noam Shalev (September 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

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Robert McClenon (talk) 16:25, 15 September 2020 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Eran Elinav has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission: Since this is an article written for pay, and commissioned by the subject themselves, it is unreasonable to expect volunteer editors to do cleanup. Please do the following:

1/Remove bold face in references to journals. Journal names go in italics. Their first use is linked to our article on them. Author names do not get highlighted to show the subject.

2. Do not use capitals for ordinary words of subjects.

3. The list of detailed subjects with references does not belong in the lede paragraph. Multiple references for each point are unnecessary, and amount to reference overkill. This is not a CV, where all publications get listed.

4. Only the first use of a term gets linked to its article.

5. Avoid one sentence paragraphs

6. Indicate citation figures for his most-cited papers.

7. The honors go in a separate section, after the description of his research

8. Do not give speculative medical applications.

Thanks!  DGG ( talk ) 18:33, 24 September 2020 (UTC)

uncited material in Rubin
The article on Rubin second par, contains many facts unsupported by references. They need to be cited, to a reliable thirdperson source. As he is not a living person, if they are all cited from one published work, that can be given as a general citation for a paragraph. I note the article was commission by the family. Family tradition or correspondence is not an acceptable source.  DGG ( talk ) 18:39, 24 September 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your guidance, I learned from it a lot!
 * I added the references to the proper paragraph and specific facts (The ones I didn't found cite for them, I deleted). Many thanks for your time and help!Ovedc (talk) 11:15, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

General advice
It is permitted to edit for pay. But when you do, you should not expect volunteer editors to have to copyedit for style, or deal with missing sources. Speaking for myself, I very much resent doing work on articles for which someone else is receiving money.  DGG ( talk ) 18:44, 24 September 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yehuda Ullmann (October 9)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KartikeyaS343 was:

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KartikeyaS (talk) 18:17, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eran Elinav (October 25)
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Primefac (talk) 13:58, 25 October 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Amos Gilhar (November 21)
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Kohlrabi Pickle (talk) 01:55, 21 November 2020 (UTC)

Orphaned non-free image File:Focus Education.png
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