User talk:Owenpayne2000

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Hello, Owenpayne2000, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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WCI Peer Review
In relation to the Wikipedia article that you will be including this information in, the lead is very clear by telling me how African Americans are disproportionately affected by COVID-19, yet it does not immediately tell me everything I will be reading about in the rest of this article (this is a good thing). The tone of the article is kept neutral and does not sway in any biased direction. The balance of this article is leaning heavily on social aspects in African American society that have been affected by the Coronavirus pandemic. You could also include scientific/medical information or statistics to give a different perspective on this issue to really show the readers of the article just how disproportionately African Americans are affected by this pandemic. As for the sources, every source given so far aids in providing further information for this article and there is no need to fix or change any source given. Kaayla02arn (talk) 15:23, 9 March 2021 (UTC)Kaayla02arn
 * Thank you for your feedback, especially about the expansion into scientific/medical information. Unfortunately, I am not well versed in STEM-based research, and frankly, I'm not well informed about writing standards for the field. I feel I may not be the best person to write about that side of the topic, but due to its informational value I will do my best to cover it. Owenpayne2000 (talk) 16:09, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

WCI
This article was very informative and kept a neutral tone while still addressing the topic at hand. I feel as if it would be much better if it had more details and was expanded on to a greater degree. The author could've gone on to talk about and provide proof of the difference of COVID-19 between African American neighborhoods and within white neighborhoods. All in all, I give this article a 7/10.

Clyde47090 (talk) 16:44, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your feedback! I'll see what I can do to expand my comparisons, but information and comparative research on COVID-19 are still scarce. Any claims made in my piece are made on comparisons made between control groups (typically white) and Black groups, gathered from available research I could find. Owenpayne2000 (talk) 16:13, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

WCI peer feedback
Hey Owenpayne2000, this article has definitely opened my eyes a little. As a black woman I already know and understand that black people get the end of the stick, it's a fact. A place that is known for bringing black people together is church. When the pandemic hit social distancing was taken into effect and people started to isolate and lose their jobs. Churches especially in black communities have been known as a non-profit. Whether it's with soup kitchens, food drives, clothing drives, or just giving back. A lot of people depended on church and it was taken away from them. People depended on the support of the community and now they have to fend for themselves.Dscarlett18 (talk) 16:49, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your feedback! I'm very glad my article was effective, I wanted to write it to make this information more available, especially for non-Black people like myself. I'll see what I can do to expand on how specific Black institutions have reacted to the pandemic, and how that has affected Black communities, but I can only do as much as I find research for. Owenpayne2000 (talk) 16:19, 10 March 2021 (UTC)