User talk:Owerby

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pandemic Pods (July 29)
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Eternal Shadow  Talk  21:23, 29 July 2020 (UTC)


 * As a very experienced reviewer here, this rejection should not have happened. It seems you had not even submitted the draft, and until you do submit it, it cannot be declined or rejected, because we assume you are still working on it. It does need references before it can be accepted, as my comment below will indicate. Add them quickly and submit, because it is a quite notable topic. If you want to notify me on my user talk page when you think its ready, you may do so.   DGG ( talk ) 22:30, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Pandemic Pods has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Pandemic Pods. Thanks!  DGG ( talk ) 22:26, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pandemic Pods has been accepted
 Pandemic Pods, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. Most new articles start out as Stub-Class or Start-Class and then attain higher grades as they develop over time. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!  DGG ( talk ) 22:32, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

however, there remain some major problems: 1. the references are not in the necessary full format, which must include the author of the item, the title  of the item, the place it was published, and thedate, as well as the link. See WP:CITEBEGIN for instructions on the usual method

2. Some paragraphs are not cited. Some of them seem to be your own opinion. You shouldn't do that here, but find a source for them or remove them.

3. Try to make the writing a little more formal. As a minoimum, replace the word "kids" with "children", or "young people"

4. I advise you to do these improvements as soon as possible, to prevent further problems. .  DGG ( talk ) 22:38, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

Nomination of Pandemic Pods for deletion
A discussion is taking place as to whether the article Pandemic Pods is suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia according to Wikipedia's policies and guidelines or whether it should be deleted.

The article will be discussed at Articles for deletion/Pandemic Pods until a consensus is reached, and anyone, including you, is welcome to contribute to the discussion. The nomination will explain the policies and guidelines which are of concern. The discussion focuses on high-quality evidence and our policies and guidelines.

Users may edit the article during the discussion, including to improve the article to address concerns raised in the discussion. However, do not remove the article-for-deletion notice from the top of the article. ZXCVBNM (TALK) 05:26, 4 August 2020 (UTC)

Greetings,, and welcome to Wikipedia's deletion process! Thank you for your contributions. As a newcomer, it may be helpful for you to read Wikipedia's deletion policy, and the pages describing the articles for deletion process, proposed deletion, and speedy deletion. Remember that deletion debates are not votes, and reasons matter, especially reasons relating to the central content policies of verifiability, neutral point of view, no original research, and what Wikipedia is not, and to the consensual community guidelines for biographies, corporations, music, and fiction. Also remember that deletion is not always the answer to a bad article. Feel free to drop me a line at my talk page if you have any questions. Again, welcome! Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 21:34, 4 August 2020 (UTC)