User talk:Oxford500/sandbox

Your bullets would definitely help the article to add. It might also help to add more sections to the article so it's not just one large paragraph followed by the references. Also making more paragraphs would help with readability. (Also references 4 & 5 are the same). Also perhaps adding the applications this theory has to the world at large, places it's used in, etc. may help. Also maybe some graphics to make it more clear/look bettter?

Nategoss (talk) 16:19, 18 November 2019 (UTC)