User talk:P34c3o4s1s

Winemaking
Hi, thanks for you contribution to winemaking. Upon examining what you added, I have unfortunately had to revert it for the following reasons:
 * It relies predominantly on a single source, with an underlying implication that the intent is to promote that source.
 * The source doesn't seem to be authoritative or reliable in accordance with Wikipedia's policies Verifiability and Reliable sources. Rather, the source seems to promote products for sale.
 * The tone of some sentences/paragraphs came across as advertising rather than the more formal tone expected in an encyclopedia.
 * The content you added contained advice about winemaking. See the policy Wikipedia is not an instruction manual.

I'll point out that we already have a homebrewing article that covers home winemaking, although the coverage could be greater. The winemaking article should contain a brief summary of the homebrewing article instead. ~Amatulić (talk) 17:43, 22 April 2010 (UTC)