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Some editing suggestions to consider for the article Ethnographic film: Hope these suggestions are somewhat useful! Jshusain (talk) 02:10, 15 March 2012 (UTC)
 * More citations and references are required to make the article more reliable.
 * Aspects in the second paragraph of the lead in can be incorporated into the "Origins" section, such as the information on Gregory Bateson, Robert Gardner and Karl Heider.
 * To improve the organization of the article, you can use more headings and subheadings. For example, creating headings/subheadings for the early developments of ethnographic film, when ethnographic film became well known, later/modern uses, etc.
 * Using some of the information already in the article, you could potentially create a section devoted to major contributors to ethnographic film and discuss their contributions (a good place to use references).