User talk:PCK1992

Viola Klein
Hi PCK1992, please take a look at the article you recently created. There are a few issues that need to be addressed: This is a very good article, but it can be improved. Thanks for your time! TYelliot &#124;  Talk  &#124;  Contribs  14:23, 16 April 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) Citation style. Wikipedia has a particular style of inline citations to help readers find references easily. Most of the existing references are (AUTHOR, YEAR) form, which is not the usual form used on the encyclopedia.
 * 2) Sections. Please try to divide some of the longer sections into subsections, so that it is easier to navigate.
 * 3) Tone. The article reads like an essay. Please see WP:TONE and WP:NOTESSAY for more guidelines.