User talk:PCoom

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Hello, PCoom, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created, such as Virtual Reality in Primary Education, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines, and may not be retained.

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Proposed deletion of Virtual Reality in Primary Education


The article Virtual Reality in Primary Education has been proposed for deletion&#32;because of the following concern: "Not a neutral presentation of views on a subject. Reads like an essay."

While all constructive contributions to Wikipedia are appreciated, pages may be deleted for any of several reasons.

You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the notice, but please explain why in your edit summary or on the article's talk page.

Please consider improving the page to address the issues raised. Removing will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and articles for deletion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. Robert McClenon (talk) 06:37, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Improvements
I am working to improve this page and am open to any suggestions. I already changed some sections in an effort to make the article more neutral as well as organized it to be less like an essay.