User talk:PTSaputo

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sovereignty of God (April 17)
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A412 (Talk &bull; C) 21:51, 17 April 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sovereignty of God (May 24)
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Seraphim System ( talk ) 10:51, 24 May 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Sovereignty of God (June 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DrStrauss was:

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Dr Strauss  talk 12:22, 30 June 2017 (UTC)

I am hoping you are still planning on helping me by providing some more detailed comments per our discussions on 6/30.PTSaputo (talk) 18:34, 3 July 2017 (UTC)
 * yep, what exactly is your question, just so I can give an equally precise answer?  Dr Strauss   talk

As a lawyer, I tend to write in a manner that probably does sound like an essay. Can you help me to understand what I might change to provide a better encyclopedic entry (or provide a specific example of the essay style in the article)?

I do not follow the NPOV comment. The article is intended to provide content on the Christian concept of Sovereignty which is a very significant subject in Christianity that underlies the Calvinist-Arminian debate, free will vs. determinism and many other debates. I was amazed to find no entry in Wikipedia for this topic. If the NPOV comment relates to the Christian viewpoint, maybe I need to make it clearer that the article is not attempting to prove God's existence or to prove that God is sovereign? I guess I do not know what came across as an NPOV issue.

As to the reliable source comment, most all of the content is directly backed up with references to well-recognized Christian authors. Can you provide a little more info on this comment?

PTSaputo (talk) 19:12, 3 July 2017 (UTC) 18:38, 3 July 2017 (UTC)
 * I am familiar with this area too, I'll give it a copyedit tomorrow morning and leave you some further comments here.  Dr Strauss   talk  19:19, 3 July 2017 (UTC)

Awesome. And I am glad that you are you familiar with the issues.PTSaputo (talk) 19:22, 3 July 2017 (UTC) have you considered putting in Maimondes and the Via Negativa? Dr Strauss 09:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)  talk

Wow! His arguments are brilliant. I had not considered how claims of sovereignty run headlong into his reasonings. I revised the Limitations section of the draft article. Let me know what you think.

I would still really appreciate further comments as you mentioned above.PTSaputo (talk) 05:13, 11 July 2017 (UTC).

PTSaputo (talk) 17:43, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Sovereignty of God has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sovereignty of God. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  03:36, 1 July 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Sovereignty of God has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Sovereignty of God. Thanks! SwisterTwister  talk  05:05, 11 July 2017 (UTC)

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Your draft article, Draft:Sovereignty of God


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Proposed deletion of Sovereignty of God in Christianity


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Removed deletion and explained reasons for doing so in the edit summary. I would propose further edits if more specific comments can be provided to identifiable portions of the article. PTSaputo (talk) 03:27, 14 January 2020 (UTC)

Nomination of Sovereignty of God in Christianity for deletion
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