User talk:Packro

Need Suggestions
Hi, Can someone take a look of page and give suggestions/edits

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Packro/sandbox

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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-Liancetalk/contribs 14:07, 10 September 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding User:Packro/sandbox
Hello, Packro. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that User:Packro/sandbox, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:01, 10 February 2022 (UTC)