User talk:Pagemd/sandbox

3 Strengths


 * Great connection to identity formation and summary of the different theories that are critical to understanding how crucial of a role personality plays in career development
 * Strong explanation of personality traits-- it makes it easier to understand how personality trait assessments are utilized in the workplace.
 * Good organization and in depth analysis of each theory and relation to career

3 Improvements * If you the heading “Career Development and Personality” above the contents page and then make the following headings (ex.Definitions, Identity, Personality Traits etc...) their own headings, it will help the format of the article * The paragraphs on identity, personality traits and personality trait assessments are long and harder to read...if you could try to separate into smaller paragraphs they will be easier to read and look less bulky.
 * Maybe add a brief discussion for the last 4 bullet points; personality/career development/race or gender are inter-related as well

Overall, awesome job! The article is very easy to understand but hits all of the main points. It is a very interesting topic because it is something we all see used today in the workplace!

JMD2192 (talk) 05:27, 19 November 2012 (UTC)Jenna Denice