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Bioherbicides Review and Suggestions
Provide more information on the list of available bioherbicides for sale on the market, discussed on the articles talk page, as a body paragraph in the article. It would be interesting to present why some bioherbicides are permitted for sale, and others are not.

(The other major classes of pesticides are insecticides, which control insects; and fungicides, which control fungi. Normally, any pesticide can only be expected to control, but not eradicate, agricultural pests.) These sentences are important for understanding the distinction between bioherbicides and other pesticides. The parentheses distracts and is not necessary.

Please specify what you mean by the word “enemy” used at the start of the second paragraph. Perhaps list examples of naturally occurring enemies.

I suggest you insert two body sections with bolded headers dedicated to the advantages of biological control agents, specific to bioherbicides. I recommend that tha sections to be about environmental safety and public health safety.

Expand on the need for careful testing proposed in the last sentence of the second paragraph. Provide more information about the safety concerns involved with using bioherbicides.

I like the idea of providing a link in the third paragraph to the pesticide index, however I am not certain that the selected index reflects or is relevant to the ideas presented in that paragraph. Find a more appropriate graph that provides information about the derived relations.

Expand on this topic: A bioherbicide based on a fungus is called a mycoherbicide.

"In the industry, bioherbicides and other biopesticides are often referred to as "naturals"." Specify what industry? This sentence could be included in the section about the environmental safety of biological control agents.

The reference links do not work.

Fei Wade (talk) 23:23, 22 November 2017 (UTC)