User talk:Paigeg7311/sandbox/group3draft

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As of 12/4/2020

For Celia
Ecs222 (talk) 16:48, 4 December 2020 (UTC) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - As of 11/30/2020
 * The individual edits look like a good start (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Cmc343/sandboxbirthingcenters) but I don't see where you've added that work to the group draft. Also, you need to add references (in text citations) for all information. Ideally, this shouldn't rely on only one source. Use the template in the editor to add the citations; references will be automatically generated.

For Audrey
Ecs222 (talk) 03:49, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
 * This looks great! There are a few bolded sections on the draft - you worked on the UK section right? One thing that might come up - using the NHS site for information about the NHS. Can you find another source - a white paper, news article, history, journal article, anything that's secondary (i.e. unaffiliated with the NHS)?

For Amelia
Ecs222 (talk) 03:55, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Also great additions! If you are able to find a couple more sources, that would help those paragraphs/sections since they are relying heavily (or entirely) on one source.
 * Sources 1, 3 and 4 are questionable. Don't take them out, but if you can find something else that backs up that info, it would be good. Those look like websites or more popular media articles; something from a major publication or something more investigative/journalistic (or ideally a peer reviewed journal) would make a better and more reliable source.
 * Do the sources from BabyCentreUK or Parents have authors? Please check and add them if they do. If they don't, again, it would be better to try to find something else to support those sections.


 * Okay! I will look for additional sources for my sections.


 * For the BabyCentreUK article, it doesn't explicitly mention authors, but it mentions that the BabyCentre Medical Advisory Board reviewed the information. The board is made up of 17 members who are either doctors, midwives, or in other ares of the health field. Would you want me to add all of them to the source information?

AmvBav196 (talk) 05:55, 1 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Sounds good - use the name of the center as the author and include as much bibliographic info as you can. There is an option to select source type, so maybe something closer to the type of paper it is will come up. If it's from a journal, select that, but maybe it's a white paper or organization publication? Ecs222 (talk) 17:06, 4 December 2020 (UTC)