User talk:Paigeryan95/sandbox

Assignment 1
Go ahead and work on "Alone." It needs a lot of help. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:47, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 2
History of Costa Rica — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paigeryan95 (talk • contribs) 01:30, 9 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good choice. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:24, 10 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Your first source is an encyclopedia, which is against WP policy. Your remaining sources look very good. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:47, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 3
Adventureland (New York) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paigeryan95 (talk • contribs) 21:11, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

Adventureland (New York) The structure of this article is good, yet it lacks information. There is only one sentence in the lead. The history section is in depth, the other sections need more information and details — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paigeryan95 (talk • contribs) 02:13, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Fun! My suggestions for the lead are fairly minor: 1. Second sentence: amusement is lower case. 2. Correct "opened seasonal;" to "open seasonally:" (with a colon). 3. In what year did Cohen and Budin buy the land? 4. When you mention Miller, include his full name and say he was the new owner (since when?). 5. Delete the sentence about Splish Splash. That's a different park, no? 6. Begin the last sentence with "The park is a popular Long Island attraction for children..." Josef Horáček (talk) 03:38, 2 March 2015 (UTC)