User talk:Pajberman/sandbox

You are absolutely right about how little information there is on his page. Also, the page lacks illustrations. As for his personal life, you can probably include some information regarding how he joins Hopkins's Wilmer's Eye Institute. As for his contribution to medicine, you have probably noticed that his page has a very strange block quotes from the book. This probably needs more improvement. As an alternative, you can probably put some of his publishments and innovations on this page in a separate section. If you find that he teaches students as well, I think that it would be a good idea to add that too. Lpeng18 (talk) 21:47, 8 April 2017 (UTC)