User talk:Palladiumpaladin/Choose an Article

Feedback on Choosing an Article
You picked five relevant articles to consider, and you do a good job of succinctly identifying key issues that could be addressed with edits. It would help if you linked to the articles you considered. The main issue for me is that you haven't identified any potential sources that you could draw on for any of the articles. Part of the purpose of this exercise is to determine whether there are relevant scholarly sources which can be drawn from for new or updated content and for citations. Sometimes there really isn't any scholarly material on which you can draw, or you can't access sources easily. These considerations could help you to decide which article to edit for this assignment. CBFraoch (talk) 21:40, 18 November 2023 (UTC)