User talk:Pallotta.8

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:Pallotta.8/sandbox and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Pallotta.8 Articles for creation help desk] or on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Josve05a&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=User_talk:Pallotta.8 reviewer's talk page].
 * You can also get real-time chat help from experienced editors.

(t) Josve05a  (c) 20:12, 5 September 2014 (UTC)

Bipedalism
Hi Pallotta.8. I noticed that your addition to the bipedalism article was removed. This was due to the fact that your addition cited no sources. It's obvious from your sandbox that you have supporting sources, but that isn't apparent from your edit to the article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:11, 20 November 2014 (UTC)