User talk:Pandalily89/Oni

Lead

The lead has been updated but does not reflect new content. The lead within the Oni sandbox draft is not concise. Information drafted in the lead section does not benefit the article. The lead section in the original Oni article is well composed. I suggest only adding to it if your contribution is significant and not already included in the lead.

Content

At this time, no new content has been added to the draft in the Oni Sandbox. All information provided is already found within the original article. Consider expanding the origins section to include more details or adding a section discussing myths surrounding Oni if there are enough resources to provide that information. Does Oni have characteristics of mythological archetypes? Is Oni found in the creation story, a hero, the hero's moral counter-example, a trickster, part of the destruction? Are there resources to provide additional information? Is there information not covered within the article, found in the resources provided in the original article?

Images and Media

No Images added

Elen Benfelen (talk) 00:07, 12 October 2021 (UTC)