User talk:Pandribs

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Grammar edits
Hi Pandribs, thank you for your contributions. I notice that you have made several language/grammar edits to different articles. Unfortunately, most of these have actually added errors. Here, for instance, you split a sentence in two. The writing was perfectly fine before your change, but afterwards, the second of the sentences is incomplete (there is no verb). These three edits introduced grammar errors ("Assistive technology (AT) is assistive, adaptive, and rehabilitative devices are used by people with disabilities" has too many verbs) and here you added an incorrect article (it's "throughout Southeast Asia", not "throughout the Southeast Asia") and removed a word that was necessary for another sentence to make sense. And a final example: here, the addition is not neutral (Wikipedia does not call things "vibrant"), it is not quite grammatical, and it repeats the information in the following sentence. You are clearly editing in good faith and trying to improve the encyclopedia, but I'd like to ask you to focus on things other than language edits, because it creates more work for your fellow editors to correct any errors that sneak in. Regards, --bonadea contributions talk 10:51, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

December 2020
Hello, I'm JackintheBox. I wanted to let you know that I removed one or more external links you added to Relay network because they seemed inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. J ACKINTHE  B  OX   • TALK 08:40, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

January 2021
Hi, I'm MDDevice. I've had to revert several of your recent edits to pages such as Cristina D'Avena and Goal orientation because they introduced grammatical errors into sentences which were previously fine. I notice an editor has already brought this up to you on your talk page but I'll reiterate it - please make sure the copyedits you make aren't introducing more errors, and are to sentances which actually require copyediting. Otherwise it creates more work to clean up. Thanks! MDDevice talk 17:38, 2 January 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Rdp060707. I wanted to let you know that I removed one or more external links you added to Hotel Management because they seemed inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. Rdp060707 (Your questions?/My fight against the devil) 08:59, 11 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vanitha Sahayavani (January 22)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 10:03, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bangalore Multi-Storied Building (January 23)
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KylieTastic (talk) 12:05, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shubhra Chadda (January 27)
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Eagleash (talk) 12:27, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shubhra Chadda (January 28)
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Fiddle  Faddle  10:38, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

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 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Shubhra Chadda. Thanks! Fiddle  Faddle  11:28, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shubhra Chadda (January 28)
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Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 17:01, 28 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shubhra Chadda (January 29)
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KylieTastic (talk) 11:13, 29 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bangalore Multi-Storied Building (January 30)
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Chetsford (talk) 04:49, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Shubhra Chadda has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Shubhra Chadda. Thanks! Fiddle  Faddle  09:51, 30 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jyoti Kumari 'the cycle girl' (February 1)
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Padavalam🌂  ►  16:27, 1 February 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jyoti Kumari 'the cycle girl' (February 3)
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Dan arndt (talk) 07:04, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Shubhra Chadda (February 3)
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 DGG ( talk ) 17:20, 3 February 2021 (UTC)

February 2021
Please stop your disruptive editing. If you continue to disrupt Wikipedia, as you did at Draft:Shubhra Chadda, you may be blocked from editing.  DGG ( talk ) 17:21, 3 February 2021 (UTC)
 * Do not repeated resubmit the same basically unsatisfactory draft at short intervals

Your submission at Articles for creation: Vanitha Sahayavani (June 14)
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 Ken Tony  Shall we discuss? 14:56, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz <sup style="font-family: Times New Roman; color: #006400;">Read! Talk! 04:52, 30 July 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Shubhra Chadda


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz <sup style="font-family: Times New Roman; color: #006400;">Read! Talk! 18:33, 3 August 2021 (UTC)

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