User talk:Paoof

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Peer Review
The lead isn’t in your sandbox. You need to update it to reflect the changes you made.

The stucture is good but some sections are very light, especially the first part of the article body.

The content is neutral

Good citations from peer-reviewed sources Bread6 (talk) 17:28, 8 November 2023 (UTC)