User talk:Paoof/Electron donor

Peer Review
I think some things that the article did well was it had a very neutral tone which is good. I liked the examples that it included however images would be helpful in them. I would have liked the lead to be longer and more expanded. I also believe that images would be really useful for this topic. I would have liked to see some images within the examples, as well as the introduction to explain the radical formation. I think the most important thing the author could do to improve the article would be to use more images, add more citations with the text (especially in the Lewis Base and Redox Reactions section) and to fix a couple minor spelling mistakes. I believe that the intro should be longer, as it seemed that the examples were longer than the introduction. I would have also liked to see more sources within the references as since there are only two, it may seem that it leans too heavily on to a single point of view.

MarissaGrosz (talk) 18:33, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Marissa

Hi, I've left comments on your peer review, let me know if you have any questions or comments!Etholn (talk) 19:54, 8 November 2023 (UTC)