User talk:Paperlapap

Feedback Gabriela Küng
I would like to know how Irvingia gabonensis looks like and what it is. Is it a shrub or a crop? From which family it is? For the information about the family you can put in a table like it is in the page of Irvingia.

You didn't mention some aspects of the cultivation. I know that perhaps you don't have some information, but if you have, please put it in!

You wrote a heading "appearance", you should fill in your text.

I like your information about the nutritional aspects. I would prefer the title "Nutritional aspects" without "of Irvingia gabonensis" because it's the title of your page.

I miss your references.

Feedback Anna Beerli
I like your entry but it would be interesting to include a small subsection on cultivation aspects. You should have included citation of your references within your article (indicated by numbers).

Irvingia gabonensis -	Content table after Introduction

Geographic Distribution: -	very nice! -	Western… orientations are written in capital letters

Appearance (maybe Characteristics would be better?) -	Nice tables (missing citation of source) -	Besides the mentioned components, kernels of - can be eaten freshly. -you wrote “energy” twice