User talk:Papworthtrust

Trust
I have moved Papworth Trust to User:Papworthtrust/sandbox because the article was written in an hopelessly unencyclopedic style. Do you realise that we do not use "we" and "you" in articles? Please find and read articles about comparable organisations; modify your text to match their style and add independent refs to show that your trust is notable. &mdash; RHaworth (Talk | contribs) 15:29, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Papworth trust
A proposed deletion template has been added to the article Papworth trust, suggesting that it be deleted according to the proposed deletion process&#32; because of the following concern:
 * this article is nothing more than an advertisement brochure.

All contributions are appreciated, but this article may not satisfy Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and the deletion notice should explain why (see also "What Wikipedia is not" and Wikipedia's deletion policy). You may prevent the proposed deletion by removing the  notice, but please explain why you disagree with the proposed deletion in your edit summary or on its talk page.

Please consider improving the article to address the issues raised because, even though removing the deletion notice will prevent deletion through the proposed deletion process, the article may still be deleted if it matches any of the speedy deletion criteria or it can be sent to Articles for Deletion, where it may be deleted if consensus to delete is reached. Click23 (talk) 13:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Userfied again
I have userfied to User:Papworthtrust/sandbox again. You have done only a bare minimum to improve the article. Did you read the tags that other editors applied? Above all where are the links to independent references? &mdash; RHaworth (Talk | contribs) 21:38, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Change account name
Welcome to Wikipedia. Because we have a policy against usernames that give the impression that the account represents a group, organization or website, I have blocked this account; please take a few moments to create a new account with a username that represents only you. You should also read our conflict of interest guideline. If your username doesn't represent a group, organization or website, you may appeal this username block by adding below this notice the text. Thank you. &mdash; RHaworth 10:57, 28 September 2010 (UTC)

Re-publish
Further to your e-mail, have you actually read the deletion log entry visible at Papworth Trust and read my messages above? None of your edits have been deleted.

We have a very strong policy about people with a COI making contributions but at least in your case I have heard of the trust - I think I did some volunteer work for it when I was at university. My recommendations are: I might just be willing to launch it for you. &mdash; RHaworth 10:57, 28 September 2010 (UTC)
 * read Wikipedia articles about comparable charities - how many have you actually looked at?
 * get yourself a new user name as per the message above - but leave a note here of that name
 * re-write the article as per above
 * let me know by a message on my user talk page.