User talk:ParaSaCompArt/sandbox

Sandbox Check
Good Day, I'm ParaSaCompArt.

I'm here to invite you to check my sandbox. it is an Article about Manuel Baldemor.

This is the Link to my sandbox :)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ParaSaCompArt/sandbox

ParaSaCompArt (talk) 03:56, 24 March 2015 (UTC)

ParaSaCompArt Sandbox Check
Hello.In the sentence, "He is also doing academic plates for his classmates." Is he still doing it at the present time? If not, you should edit it in a past tense.Ms.popsie21 (talk) 18:45, 2 April 2015 (UTC)

Goodevening to you co-editor! :D i think a picture of the artist can help your article be more efficicent goodjob on doing the table for his exhibits too! from AnthonyAguila24 (talk) 19:11, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

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I think you need to search for images and works so that the artist can be more famous and his works. from Jaloves{talk) — Preceding undated comment added 00:57, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Sandbox Check
Hello, can you please put footnotes somewhere near his career or exhibitions for quick trivias? Rf casalan1995 (talk) Rf casalan1995 05:47, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

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Does your artist had any affiliation? User:Magicflakes Magicflakes (talk) 01:10, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Hello
The career section should have sub sections because it's too long and the reader will be confused so there has to be sub sections. Kielloggs 23:57, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

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Hi there, you don't need so many sub sections in your article. "Manuel Baldemor" and "Early Career and Education" can be merged together, and "Solo Exhibits" and "Group Exhibits" can be removed altogether. Just leave all shows he's participated in with "Exhibits" and indicate whether he did them solo or in a group.

Comments regarding your article about Manuel B.
Hello ParaSaCompArt! I have read your sandbox and here are my comments: Your article is very organised and written well -- the content of your article is good and complete. However, I suggest that you read the guidelines for referencing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners Although you were able to list down all of your sources, you weren't able to site them properly. Renee1483 (talk) 01:28, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Comments about the sandbox
Hello ParaSaCompArt, I have read your sandbox article and I found it very interesting and informative. Rrrrraymond (talk) 02:34, 7 April 2015 (UTC)