User talk:Paranoid Numanoid/sandbox

I'd like an editor to look over my article please and give me some constructive feedback. It has grown and I have incorporated feedback already. I know I have lots of references to do outside the opening sections. But any general advice or tips please? One question, have I got the title in the right place? Forgive me, I'm new. He's always known as Rev Charles Swainson, MA and it helps to disambiguate from others of the same or similar names. Many thanks!! Paranoid Numanoid (talk) 01:19, 27 February 2021 (UTC)