User talk:Parastoobahamin/sandbox

Comments on topic
Hi Parastoo, you have wonderfully outlined three academic sources on the TED discussion board and I hope you're able to draw from them and create a thorough page on this topic soon. Hishaikh (talk) 21:12, 15 November 2018 (UTC)Hina

comments december 6
Hi Parastoo, I see you haven't edited since 11/19, but please format and edit text as well as add reference section. Please let me know how I can help you move forward as we are nearing the end of the quarter. Hishaikh (talk) 20:00, 6 December 2018 (UTC)Hina

My final article
I have added all my content to my sandbox. I also noticed the strange reference formatting and have changed it. Could you tell me if it looks Okay now? And if the formatting and writing of my article seem sound? Parastoobahamin (talk) 23:51, 6 December 2018 (UTC)