User talk:ParkSlay3r

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Hello, ParkSlay3r, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Review for "Christmas Bay (Texas)" page additions
Hi ParkSlay3r - good job editing the page on Christmas Bay in Texas! You've made some great improvements to this page. What follows is a review by an external reviewer who based their comments on the version of your page that's available at this link.

Reviewer comments:
I have separated my review into the sections as seen on the Wikipedia page.

Christmas Bay

 * I really enjoyed the additions you have in your sandbox! I would suggest adding a reference to the part about the German settlers and San Luis city being on Christmas Bay since that is not clear.
 * I would even suggest making a subheading called “History” and putting your paragraph about the city of San Luis there. Make sure to add a reference here to indicate where you got this information from. Here is some links you can use:
 * 1) https://www.tshaonline.org/handbook/entries/san-luis-tx
 * 2) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/San_Luis_Pass
 * There is a Christmas Bay Foundation that you can mention in your conservation section or you can make another subheading just for the foundation. Here is the link for that site: http://www.christmasbayfoundation.org/our-story/

Conclusion

 * Overall, your sandbox has some great points that were missing from the original page. If you add in a few more references I think that would finish up your contribution. Great job on the depth of your research!

I hope the above is helpful as you wrap up your edits on your Wikipedia page! If you have any questions about this review, please let me know and I'll help you contact the reviewer. JoGDelta (talk) 05:32, 30 November 2020 (UTC)