User talk:Park Davi

Recent DM Insertion - Education
Hi - it looks like you are recent newcomer to Wiki so I'm going to try and help you out. Your recent insertion on the Davis-Monthan AFB page (copied at the bottom for your convenience) violates several Wikipedia guidelines notably WP:Biased phrases, WP:Neutral point of view, and WP:NOTCATALOG just to name a few (click on the links to read what I'm referring to). Also web links can be used as references to your text, but are not simply pasted into the text (see WP:Referencing for beginners).

However, rather than deleting the whole insertion, as a good portion of established editors would, or editting it myself, I'd like to give YOU the opportunity to improve it as this will help you immensely in your Wiki enjoyment. As someone who also made mistakes in the beginning, I know that I really appreciated those editors who tried to steer me in the right direction rather than simply stomping on me. Simply read up on the major issues I see with your paragraph and it should be obvious the changes that need to be made. You know - teach you to fish rather than just giving a fish to you. If you need any help or advice, just post a request on my talk page and I'll be happy to oblige. If it's still in it's current form in a week, which I highly doubt considering how many people track the DM page, I'll take care of it myself. Yours -Ckruschke (talk) 18:25, 12 January 2012 (UTC)Ckruschke

Education
Park University is one of the schools located at the Davis-Monthan Education Center. At Park University, our goal is to make it as easy and inexpensive as possible for you to complete your degree and to build your success. Park understand what a challenge it is to work full-time, juggle family responsibilities and attend class. That’s why Park offers more choices of class times, locations and Online options for completing your degree. Park not only serves military members and their dependents who are assigned to our Air Force Base, but also welcome all civilians in the local communities.