User talk:Parkerdaley/Business incubator

Peer Review for Business incubator article addition
Here are my comments:

Regarding: Incubators often aggregate themselves into networks which are used to share good practices and new methodologies.

Change: “which are used” to “in order to”

Add a reference to the French national network information.

Collective of founders, typically men -> remove typically men, seems irrelevant

Many of the founders have dropped out of Stanford to pursue careers needs a citation

Professional security probably doesn’t need to be mentioned, seems tangential

Broadly, I would almost separate incubator networks from Europe from Silicon Valley founder houses because those seem to be two slightly different topics. Maybe you could split them up into two different sections?

Overall, I really like your addition. I think it clearly frames founder houses and this relation to business incubators. Great job.

Jtp wiki (talk) 00:15, 2 June 2023 (UTC)