User talk:Parniav/sandbox

Some good problems that you identified within your topic. When you find out exactly what you want to talk about then you should try and make it organized and that it flows well. Besides that it looks like a good start. Arsmith24 (talk) 03:26, 5 November 2016 (UTC)

The idea of your topic to me is very sound, the only thing is at the end of your proposal you talk about opinions and it might be harder to keep a neutral view when using those sources. And that in a sort is attributed to your sources. Those seems like ok sources though they might be a little to opinionated.Blim1711 (talk) 20:23, 11 November 2016 (UTC)