User talk:Parry0702/Uzi (video game player)/KoichiSupNoodle Peer Review

Play-by-play in the 'Career' tab is detailed and adds a lot to that section.

I would suggest finding sources (I know it's hard though, I'm having the same problem). Maybe a thing that could help make the page look more developed is to add an image/photo of the gamer. Maybe look for the gamer's early life/biography (if there is one) and maybe create a section for that before the 'Career' section.

The play-by-play is applicable to my article because it's similar to plot summary like in the films in the Wikipedia article I'm working on. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KoichiSupNoodle (talk • contribs) 19:15, 6 March 2020 (UTC)